moNkEys in ACTiON :)

Article posted January 7, 2008 at 03:30 PM GMT0 • Reads 136

I found the tutorial to be very easy.



I disliked this very much because of how easy it was.



The outcome was very successful because it was easy to follow what my teacher was saying. I think you should go a little faster but still teach the same stuff.



I can make my own people. I can decorate the background and make a new sound.



It would be very fun to create your own imaginary players and when you had the chance to play the game afterwards.



I wish I could do all the motions easier than I can now. Like where they have to go and everything like that.

Review

Article posted January 15, 2008 at 03:31 PM GMT0 • Reads 44

I read "The Boy With Twelve Tooes." Yes. This was plot was original but interesting at the same time. I don't think there s any conflict in this story. The only thing that might be a slight conflict would be when the boy wanted to take the food from the town and the teddy bear didn't. No, there is not. The climax does not satisfy me because the old lady died and she helped the little boy a lot. I love the story the way it is and I do not want to change it. The only character that was not realistic in the story was the talking teddy bear. The boy was very individual because he wanted to be by himself because he has twelve fingers and because he wanted to run away and have independence. Yes, there is a very good description on the characters and the dialogue was very interesting and creative. Their are no word choices I need to change. I think this culture couldn't be anyone. This story has some uniqueness because the boy has twelve toes and the teddy bear can talk. I think the love relationship at the end of the story should and instead the uncle should come back and apologize for being so rude and mean. I don't think it needs any improvement because what I say in previous on in future sentences was already said that I would need to say. The theme of he story is that no matter what people look like you should always treat them with respect. I like this story because it had fantasy and normal people combined.

ideas

Article posted January 22, 2008 at 03:18 PM GMT0 • Reads 118

1. We can write about a person who has super powers

2 We can write about sports

3 We can write about an adventure to another time

4 We can write about a TV show

5 We can write about dancing

6 We can write about other peoples culture

7 We can write about our culture

8 We can write about movies or the story to some of them

9 We can write about going into space

10 We can write about a book