My Trip To Mexico

Article posted October 18, 2007 at 10:34 PM GMT0 • Reads 546

Martin



I really want to go to Mexico because I really want to go to the parties and do a lot of cool stuff outside. I want to go because you could do a lot of stuff and you could play all day. I get a lot of food and I can play soccer and you can go to many places.

Camera Crew

Article posted October 30, 2007 at 11:18 PM GMT0 • Reads 73

Martin



On Monday we had a camera crew in our class. They were video taping us. Mr. Crosby was showing us Google Earth. They were talking to different people and they were pulling people to the back of the classroom to talk to them about different things we are doing in class. They saw Mr. Crosby showing us Google Earth. They were talking to Celest on the laptop. They were video tapping us work on the laptop. They were also talking about their work.

Halloween

Article posted November 8, 2007 at 08:44 PM GMT0 • Reads 73

Martin



I am going to tell you how my Halloween went. On October 31,2007, I went trick or treating and I got a lot of candy. Then we went to more houses and we got more candy. We got a lot of things and we were getting a lot of candy. I was scaring people.

Article posted November 16, 2007 at 07:17 PM GMT0 • Reads 63

WILD ISLAND



Martin



When I went to Wild Island I went to lots of rides. I was very happy. I went to scary rides. I also went swimming the water was very cold. We went to eat too. I ate a hot dog. When I was done eating I sat down for a little while and then I went to the rides. When I was tiered we went home to take a shower. But I asked my dad if next Sunday we could come again.





THE END

WILD ISLAND

Article posted November 16, 2007 at 11:31 PM GMT0 • Reads 71

Martin



When I went to Wild Island I went to lots of rides. I was very happy. I went to scary rides. I also went swimming the water was very cold. We went to eat too. I ate a hot dog. When I was done eating I sat down for a little while and then I went to the rides. When I was tiered we went home to take a shower. But I asked my dad if next Sunday we could come again.





THE END

Article posted November 21, 2007 at 07:52 PM GMT0 • Reads 54

THANKSGIVING FEAST

Martin



I think I will like the turkey because its good but I never tasted before. I think I will like the duck and the deer. Me and my famlly will have 2 turkeys. I will have a lot of turkey. I will eat at my house. My favorite part of Thanksgiving is staying at my house. I like staying at my house because it’s fun. At last our class ate the pumpkin pie and we took pictures and we had lots of fun.

Article posted December 19, 2007 at 07:40 PM GMT0 • Reads 93

MANIAC MAGEE

MARTIN



Maniac Magee was an orphan. His parents were killed and he had to live with his aunt and uncle because he didn't have any where to live. But he ran away from his aunt and uncle and he found a friend. He wants to go live with her. Then he moved in with her and she had brothers. He was living there but he ran away from there again. He didn't have any food to eat but he came back.

Article posted January 16, 2008 at 11:20 PM GMT0 • Reads 90

SNOWY DAY

MARTIN





One day on a snowy day me and my friend were playing outside making a snowman. We first started with the biggest snowball. Then we started with the body. Last but not least the head. Then we put the carrot, mouth, buttons and the eyes.

Then me and my friend were making snow angel.

Then we went to go eat a hot dog and we went to go make a lot of snow angel.

After me and my friend went sledding in a big hill. We both went together in the small one. But in the big hill I went alone. Me And my friend went three times.

HOW TO FIX YOUR STORY

Article posted February 8, 2008 at 08:14 PM GMT0 • Reads 301

MARTIN



First you have to read it carfuly then you have to spellcheckit then you have to spell checkit then you have to iditing then you have to proofreading carefully writing looking for spelling errors for capitalization mistakes,punctuation errorrscorrectEnglish does it sound right print it out to check.Re-read put your finger on ever first letter in a sentence,put your finger on names put your finger on each word.Double space to make work easier to see,read out loud so your ears’’see it cariring about your work pay attention/focus I want to do a good job and active.