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teacher: Valleri VanPatten

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Article posted June 1, 2010 at 03:28 PM GMT0 • Reads 65

1. I had a dog

his name was Goldie

my dog Goldie had yellow hair

he loved to play fetch and

he loved to run

that's my dog Goldie

I miss him a lot.

2. The reason he reacted that way was because he does not have a pet and I don't think that he ever did because his mom and dad did not like pet or want pets.

3. One of the things i would change is I would make it a little bit longer so that people did not go through it so fast and also make it better by adding more details and stuff like that.

Article posted June 1, 2010 at 03:28 PM GMT0 • Reads 65



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Article posted June 1, 2010 at 03:32 PM GMT0 • Reads 34

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Yes, I agree to that girls are good poetry writers and not boys boys are good at some poems but not alot.

2. Someone who I think look like a poet is someone with some glasses.

3. My first impressions of the book is that I thought the book would be a bad book but now that we are in the book it is getting better and better as we go on.

Article posted June 1, 2010 at 03:32 PM GMT0 • Reads 34



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Article posted June 1, 2010 at 03:35 PM GMT0 • Reads 36

1. At the beginning of the book he is not a writer and he said that poetry is for girls not boys.

2. The reason he writes about the blue car is because mayby he want a blue car when he is old enough to drive in a car.

3. It was his first one and it was good. The reason Miss Stretchberry got him to write more poems is hanging them up on the board.





poems are cool just

like a pool most people

get cool when they are in a pool

Article posted June 1, 2010 at 03:35 PM GMT0 • Reads 36



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Article posted June 9, 2010 at 03:31 PM GMT0 • Reads 36

1. The reason he is borrowing ideas from other poets is because they have been doing this for so many years.



2.Yes, because some other poets have different ideas like some of them have rhyming and some don't, so some of them do different things.

3. How you do not copy is to not copy 10 words out of a sentens when you only should copy 3 cause if you do it is plagarism.

4. I do have a hard time sharing my stuff in the classroom because I think that people will make fun of me and I am not good talking in front of people.

Article posted June 9, 2010 at 03:31 PM GMT0 • Reads 36



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Article posted June 16, 2010 at 03:23 PM GMT0 • Reads 32

1. What I think Jack's feelings toward Sky are very nice he feels very bad that Sky is dead because he thought that

Sky was one of the very best thing that is what I thought of my dog.

Article posted June 16, 2010 at 03:23 PM GMT0 • Reads 32



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Article posted June 16, 2010 at 03:30 PM GMT0 • Reads 75

1. I was told to use rhyming so that it would sond good other than that I do not remember.

2. A nice teacher that make stuff for her kids and that is just like Miss Goodumberry the sixth grade home and career teacher. I do not know how to spell that.

Article posted June 16, 2010 at 03:30 PM GMT0 • Reads 75



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