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Article posted June 2, 2010 at 04:02 PM GMT0 • Reads 49

#1 No...I don't think that only girls should write poems I think boys should have to do it too. If only girls had to do poems then I think that there should be a law saying that girls and boys are the same and they can do the same things.



#2 I think that a poet should look nice and fancy. They should also have good books not bad ones. They have to have a computer for their poems because some people like the computer more. A poet also should have good hand writing if they write the book.



#3 I think that the book looks good and interesting. I can't wait to read the book.

els blog #2

Article posted June 4, 2010 at 03:54 PM GMT0 • Reads 35

1...At the begining it says

I dont want to

Becuse boys

don't write poetry

 

Girls do...

Jack does not want to write a poem becuse according to Jack, boys don't write poems only girls do so that is why Jack doesnt write poems. 

2... The blue car was important to Jack because Jack  likes the color blue and likes fast cars going down the road with mudd all up the side.

 3.... Miss Strechberry is so interested in Jacks first poem because  he did not tell more about the blue car and did not say more about the car and Miss S is just trying to have Jack do more about the car. JAck did not tell a lot about the car so that is why Miss S is so interested in the blue car.0

3...Miss Strechbeerrey is so interested in Jacks first poem becuse Jack said that boys dont write poems and the blue car was his first ont that was longer and told a lot.

ELS assignment #3

Article posted June 8, 2010 at 04:19 PM GMT0 • Reads 36

#1 What pet do you want to own

I don't want to own a pet

Even if I want to I will never own a pet

I don't want to own a pet and I don't know why?

Why, Why, Why, Why don't I want to own a pet?

Why not a fish they can swim in a pool with you and you can do a lot with a fish ?

no no no I will not own a fish what if I forget the fish in the pool and the center drain kills it

I will never own a pet.

 

#2 Why can't I make up a pet like a flea? Miss S wants him to do the poem because she thinks that if he does it a lot that he will like to write poems, so he thinks that boys write poems too.

#3 If I was the editor of Love That Dog I would change nothing about this book I think that it is a good book and even if I did not like one I would still keep it the same.

els assignment #4

Article posted June 9, 2010 at 04:17 PM GMT0 • Reads 60

#1     jack borrows other poets ideas becuse he probably thinks that it is a good ideas becuse jack would not borrow bad one becuse who wonts to do a bad poem.

#2       Somethines it helps him and sometimes it does not help him.When he was doing the blue car it helped him becuse he had to do more so that he can lern more about just that blue car getting muddy he had to tell more so he knows more about write poems.

#3     Jack changes the poems to make them his and only some words he keeps the same but that is still not plagerism. So Jack is not coping other poets so Jack is doing good  not coping others all he is doing is getting ideas from other people.

#4    Jacks class mates will not make fun of him becuse Miss S. was not going to put his name on his poem so no one will make fun of him. Yes I have and I was scared but  I got 100%.